Showing posts with label writing. Show all posts
Showing posts with label writing. Show all posts

Saturday, August 8, 2015

Creative Writing - blended approach - Tam Y Proctor

Great to see Tam's ideas in this afternoon's CETA's mini conference. Her workshop was based around 
'How to integrate technology in a writing unit -  not just with a whizz bang technology approach'. It was focussed around a Yr 10 class. 

Short Story task - specific outcomes 

A creative writing  built from the literature - Term 1 film study, generated a setting - an integrated approach to curriculum planning. 

Pre writing tasks -create a visual representation of the setting - use your BYOD - and use familiar software - had to turn with a design day 1, Term 2.
May have to rework setting as story develops - some use paint and paper, some Lego, some computer game, some mine craft, some sketch up, some 3D printed.
Typical short story, conflict - and then looked at the writer's purpose. 
Created a video discussing the purpose of the short story, where had the idea come from. 
- describe the idea
- describe the setting 

Could use whatever tool they needed to do this - on screen video cast, talking head 
- questions about the short story 
- what problems they had 

Assessments have 3 parts - writing, the setting design and a QR code linked to their video

All students have a school only You Tube video - so they all posted on these. Great idea for all kids to have their own YouTube channel.

Comprehensive reflection at the end of this - collaboration space, and OneNote 
Moodle time stamps everything.

Technology included - phones, videos, QR codes.

Google Earth - setting activity - I think this is a great task 
Students plot the setting points and they narrate voice overs of this, discussing the setting. Rather than just writing about the setting. They still had to write about the setting later on. 
Students worked on this as collaborative groups. 
OneNote - used to build the collaborative notes. 











Friday, August 29, 2014

Conversations with Eleanor Catton

As part of the 50th anniversary of CETA (Canterbury English Teachers'Assn), Eleanor Catton spoke today with a group of English teachers from Canterbury. Hosted by John Ruge, St Margaret's College in their new auditorium. 


On Teaching Creative Writing

Interesting comment that as a tutor at MIT it's interesting to be on the receiving end of what students come out of high school English with. 

There is no one way to write well ; no word is more poetic than any other; no hierarchy of structures.

Sees the need for less 'static' ie no change or movement - possibly because of NZQA explanatory notes !! Have we the lost the plot as to what to reward in creative writing - a lot of quiet revelations on not much at all.

We need to be encouraging action - what happens next - where to? Movies focus on strong story telling - that's what engages young people.

The workshop model at tertiary - but not possible at the secondary school - skills based teaching necesaary for creative writing.

Story - Robert McKee

- premise and controlling idea - controlling idea should never be one word
- premise should always be a little scary - element of unknowing in the premise 
- the controlling idea may not fully come out till later
- Luminaries - paradoxical ideas of love and money -

Recommended Texts for Teaching  Writing 

Impro - K Johnson

Rose where did you get that red?  - K Cope

Poetry in the making - Ted Hughes 

Some Writing Tips and Activities 

 3 word sentences 
- only allowed to use 3 word sentences to write a story - subject , object , predicate - if you want to use an adjective what would you leave out

How, why or what next - if a reader is not asking any of these - your story is boring 
- they should rotate through these 3 questions 

- start with any sentence starter and ask the questions - manipulate how you answer these questions 

- know the attraction - see what the reader wants but don't necessarily in the order that they want

- screen writing ideas lend the best advice 

DDDA
4 ways to have action DDDA - decision deed discovery accident ( deeds and accidents external - decision and discovery internal ) 
- card activity  - DDDA cards - mix and match - these can become 4 lines stories - always a random selection 

- as a grid we live in the crossroads of these 4 - in control and out of control - story needs to sit in the middle of this grid 

Excuse VS Explanation
- choose a misdemeanour
- collate the excuses - how ridiculous they are
- explanations create good prose 

Yes/Yes
- how to frame the statement for an argument
- give out an argument - every student to write 2 questions that have a yes answer - this can build the argument 

- stories about 1sts - things that we don't expect as a reader 

Fortunately / Unfortunately - in order around the room - ambition has to be solved if not achieved - rule - accept all offers!!

- encouraging students to write about counter culture - levels of logic 
- rules of the real world - consistency -  eg if people can fly - how high? everyone? distance? etc
- whatever your rules are, you have to believe them - they have to be real to the reader 

- fiction doesn't have a sound track - a writer had to direct ; stage set ; sound track - everything -  the writer has to create that sense  - love is not created by just using the word 'love'
- beginning with film - is a way in for students 

- fiction and essay  writing - driven in the same way - sees poetry as being at a 'imbibed' at a different speed 

J Cameron - the cycle of the heroes journey - ways growing and developing 
- every story has a movement into the unknown